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by neeti2711 » Fri Jun 02, 2017 6:37 am
As the journalist left to interview the convicted murderer, she was advised of the man's short temper, told she should not anger him, and was given a tape recorder.

(A) of the man's short temper, told she should not anger him, and was
(B) of the man's short temper, told she should not anger him, and
(C) of the man's short temper and that she should not anger him and
(D) that the man had a short temper, should not anger him, and was
(E) that the man had a short temper, that she should not anger him, and was

OA: E

Is this question representative of the official GMAT SC question?

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by Ali Tariq » Fri Jun 02, 2017 6:47 am
neeti2711 wrote: Is this question representative of the official GMAT SC question?
No.
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by ceilidh.erickson » Mon Jun 12, 2017 10:06 am
This is a perfect example of why you should always post your sources. This is a poorly written question, and the OA as posted does not adhere to parallelism (and is generally pretty awkward).

Other students would benefit from knowing which sources are GMAT-like and which are not! Please tell us where you found this question.
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by ceilidh.erickson » Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:37 am
Neeti, following up - what is the source of this question?
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by neeti2711 » Mon Jun 19, 2017 10:37 pm
Source: Manhattan Review Sentence Correction Guide (Pdf)

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by ceilidh.erickson » Tue Jun 20, 2017 4:00 pm
neeti2711 wrote:Source: Manhattan Review Sentence Correction Guide (Pdf)
Unfortunately this is one of a number of un-GMAT-like questions from this source that I've seen posted in this forum. I would strongly advice staying away from sources that publish un-GMAT-like material.

I also must awkwardly point out once again that this resource is *not* to be confused with Manhattan Prep (aka Manhattan GMAT), who are consistently the most recommended GMAT resource.
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