Recent efforts of Panama's agricultural sector have improved techniques, equipment, quality of seeds up to global standards, and have reduced wastage in cultivating its most promising crops such as bananas and coffee
A. techniques, equipment, quality of seeds up to global standards, and have reduced wastage in cultivating
B. up to global standards techniques, equipment, quality of seeds, and reduced wastage in cultivating
C. up to global standards the techniques, equipment, quality of seeds, while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
D. techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
E. techniques, equipment, quality of seeds up to global standards, and reduced wastage in the cultivation of
OE D
What is wrong with A
Parallelism
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As u have correctly pointed out this is a parallelism question here is the structure -
X, Y and Z
So , these X , Y and Z ( Listing something ) must be parallel.
Further the word improved must modify the word following it (since it acts like an adjective) .
Now lets check the options -
A. techniques, equipment, quality of seeds up to global standards, and have reduced wastage in cultivating
X = techniques
Y = equipment
z = have reduced wastage in cultivating
The highlighted part in red is not parallel to the other parallel elements of the sentence...
D. techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
Teh structure here is -
X = techniques
Y = equipment
z = quality of seeds
The elements are parallel.
Lets check further
D. techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
To the best of my knowledge " up to global standards " refers to all the three elements - techniques , equipment, and quality of seeds
And the red highlighted part means at the same time .
lets deconstruct the meaning of the sentence now -
Recent efforts of Panama's agricultural sector have improved techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of its most promising crops such as bananas and coffee
Hope this helps !!
X, Y and Z
So , these X , Y and Z ( Listing something ) must be parallel.
Further the word improved must modify the word following it (since it acts like an adjective) .
Now lets check the options -
A. techniques, equipment, quality of seeds up to global standards, and have reduced wastage in cultivating
X = techniques
Y = equipment
z = have reduced wastage in cultivating
The highlighted part in red is not parallel to the other parallel elements of the sentence...
D. techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
Teh structure here is -
X = techniques
Y = equipment
z = quality of seeds
The elements are parallel.
Lets check further
D. techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of
To the best of my knowledge " up to global standards " refers to all the three elements - techniques , equipment, and quality of seeds
And the red highlighted part means at the same time .
lets deconstruct the meaning of the sentence now -
Recent efforts of Panama's agricultural sector have improved techniques, equipment, and quality of seeds up to global standards while reducing wastage in the cultivation of its most promising crops such as bananas and coffee
Hope this helps !!
Abhishek