The biathlon is one of the world's most demanding sports, it combines the endurance of cross country skiing with the precision of expert marksmanship.
A)sports, it combines
B)sports; that combines
C)sports; it combines
D)sports, where they combine
E)sports in which they combine
Guys ,
I know that the original sentence is a run on sentence so i can eliminate option A and i can also eliminate option D and E because of plural. But i am confused between B and C.
Pls suggest and correct me i am wrong.
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IMO- C
You are correct about the sentence being a run on sentence however the usage of 'which combines' - a non essential modifier would have solved the problem.
When a semicolon is used, both the sides of the semicolon need to be individual sentences and need to be related.
Option B does not allow the part after the semicolon to be a complete sentence beacuse of the use of THAT which is an essential modifier.
Option C uses IT to directly refer to the Biathlon and also satisfies the requirement of the part after the semi colon to be a complete sentence.[/spoiler]
You are correct about the sentence being a run on sentence however the usage of 'which combines' - a non essential modifier would have solved the problem.
When a semicolon is used, both the sides of the semicolon need to be individual sentences and need to be related.
Option B does not allow the part after the semicolon to be a complete sentence beacuse of the use of THAT which is an essential modifier.
Option C uses IT to directly refer to the Biathlon and also satisfies the requirement of the part after the semi colon to be a complete sentence.[/spoiler]
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IMO- C
You are correct about the sentence being a run on sentence however the usage of 'which combines' - a non essential modifier would have solved the problem.
When a semicolon is used, both the sides of the semicolon need to be individual sentences and need to be related.
Option B does not allow the part after the semicolon to be a complete sentence beacuse of the use of THAT which is an essential modifier.
Option C uses IT to directly refer to the Biathlon and also satisfies the requirement of the part after the semi colon to be a complete sentence.[/spoiler]
You are correct about the sentence being a run on sentence however the usage of 'which combines' - a non essential modifier would have solved the problem.
When a semicolon is used, both the sides of the semicolon need to be individual sentences and need to be related.
Option B does not allow the part after the semicolon to be a complete sentence beacuse of the use of THAT which is an essential modifier.
Option C uses IT to directly refer to the Biathlon and also satisfies the requirement of the part after the semi colon to be a complete sentence.[/spoiler]
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