Starfish, with anywhere from five to eight arms, have a strong regenerative ability, and if one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and growing an extra one or two.
A one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and
B one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating and
C they lose one arm they quickly replace it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating,
D they lose one arm they are quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating,
E they lose one arm it is quickly replaced, sometimes with the animal overcompensating
why is option C wrong ???
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In A, the first it (singular) does not agree with its intended antecedent, starfish (plural). Eliminate A.Starfish, with anywhere from five to eight arms, have a strong regenerative ability, and if one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and growing an extra one or two.
A one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and
B one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating and
C they lose one arm they quickly replace it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating,
D they lose one arm they are quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating,
E they lose one arm it is quickly replaced, sometimes with the animal overcompensating,
In D, the second they (plural) does not agree with its intended antecedent, arm (singular). Eliminate D.
In C and E, sometimes by the animal and sometimes with the animal imply a nonsensical meaning: that the lost arm is replaced sometimes NOT BY the animal or sometimes WITHOUT the animal.
Eliminate C and E.
The correct answer is B.
Where a modifier is placed affects MEANING.
Always notice when a modifier such as SOMETIMES changes position in the answer choices.
In the OA, sometimes correctly modifies overcompensating and growing:
If one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal SOMETIMES OVERCOMPENSATING AND GROWING an extra one or two.
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Hi abhasjha,
The correct answer is B.
Answer C is incorrect because of the "sometimes by the animal overcompensating" phrase. "Sometimes" implies that a certain action (growing extra arms) does not always take place, an idea which might make sense. However, the placement of "sometimes" next to "by" suggests that the extra arms are not always grown by the animal - just sometimes. That implies that the arms are sometimes grown by something else, which doesn't make sense!
The correct answer is B.
Answer C is incorrect because of the "sometimes by the animal overcompensating" phrase. "Sometimes" implies that a certain action (growing extra arms) does not always take place, an idea which might make sense. However, the placement of "sometimes" next to "by" suggests that the extra arms are not always grown by the animal - just sometimes. That implies that the arms are sometimes grown by something else, which doesn't make sense!
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Hi abhasjha,
Both Mitch and David have properly explained the Modification problem with answer C, so I won't rehash that here. Instead I'll focus on more of a pronoun/"style" issue...
The opening part of the sentence "Starfish....have a strong ability" clearly refers to a plural subject; the intent of this part of the sentence is to provide us with information about ALL Starfish. Later on, the sentence refers to a specific situation that "the animal" might face (this appears in all 5 answer choices, so we cannot change it). "The animal" is singular, so the pronoun "they" does not match. Answers C, D and E would have to be eliminated.
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Both Mitch and David have properly explained the Modification problem with answer C, so I won't rehash that here. Instead I'll focus on more of a pronoun/"style" issue...
The opening part of the sentence "Starfish....have a strong ability" clearly refers to a plural subject; the intent of this part of the sentence is to provide us with information about ALL Starfish. Later on, the sentence refers to a specific situation that "the animal" might face (this appears in all 5 answer choices, so we cannot change it). "The animal" is singular, so the pronoun "they" does not match. Answers C, D and E would have to be eliminated.
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Hi Mitch,GMATGuruNY wrote:In A, the first it (singular) does not agree with its intended antecedent, starfish (plural). Eliminate A.Starfish, with anywhere from five to eight arms, have a strong regenerative ability, and if one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and growing an extra one or two.
A one arm is lost it quickly replaces it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating and
B one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating and
C they lose one arm they quickly replace it, sometimes by the animal overcompensating,
D they lose one arm they are quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating,
E they lose one arm it is quickly replaced, sometimes with the animal overcompensating,
In D, the second they (plural) does not agree with its intended antecedent, arm (singular). Eliminate D.
In C and E, sometimes by the animal and sometimes with the animal imply a nonsensical meaning: that the lost arm is replaced sometimes NOT BY the animal or sometimes WITHOUT the animal.
Eliminate C and E.
The correct answer is B.
Where a modifier is placed affects MEANING.
Always notice when a modifier such as SOMETIMES changes position in the answer choices.
In the OA, sometimes correctly modifies overcompensating and growing:
If one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal SOMETIMES OVERCOMPENSATING AND GROWING an extra one or two.
I eliminated C, and E in the following ways.
C-sometimes by the animal overcompensating,growing an extra one or two.- Here we need 'and' between overcompensating and growing.
Besides, Starfish can't replace arm by their own. Actually arm is replaced naturally. So, it is wrong to say " they replace it"
E-sometimes by the animal overcompensating growing ----. Overcompensating growing- wrong
Am I correct in my elimination process?
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Good work.Md Raihan Uddin wrote: Hi Mitch,
I eliminated C, and E in the following ways.
C-sometimes by the animal overcompensating,growing an extra one or two.- Here we need 'and' between overcompensating and growing.
Besides, Starfish can't replace arm by their own. Actually arm is replaced naturally. So, it is wrong to say " they replace it"
E-sometimes by the animal overcompensating growing ----. Overcompensating growing- wrong
Am I correct in my elimination process?
Your reasons for eliminating C and E are valid.
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