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Profile Evaluation

by nitmba » Tue Jul 16, 2013 4:32 am
Last year I didnt apply to MBA schools as one rejection was enough and I thought i need to build on my profile. I hope to apply this year.

Educational Background:

I graduated from IIT (one of the premier institute in the country for engineering) in 2008. However my gpa was a bit on the lower side, and that's why I particularly made sure I score well in my GMAT (760)

Professional Background:
In 2008 when I passed out of IIT, I joined an outsourcing analytics startup Mu Sigma (which has become really successful now). I had two offers with Mu Sigma being the less paying but I still opted for Mu Sigma cause, I was interviewed by the CEO of the company and I was impressed by him.
While I started my career being a Business Analyst, I wanted to learn more about how to grow a business, so I joined the Sales team to work with the CEO. I was the only non MBA person selected for the role and later I helped to grow the team to a 4 member team (by showcasing the success that can be achieved)

Parallel, I was also Core Team member of an NGO called the Indian Youth Climate Network, being their Funding Coordinator (tenure being 1 year). We finished with 3 flagship project during my tenure. During my tenure with IYCN I realized the solving India's social problems was much more complex than the corporate problems and I realized that this is what I would want to do in the long run. I figured that these problems can be solved either by creating jobs or by designing effective policies
Hence joined an entrepreneurial venture with a technology focused team to help them in their sales and business development effort. I wanted to implement what I learnt at Mu Sigma and help another similar company achieve growth using my skills. (however this venture didn't pan out well and I quit the job in 8 months much to the dislike of the CEO) but at the same time I wasn't being fully utilized and I didn't see myself as a right cultural fit for the organization.

I was looking for a job but none excite me as much, so I decided I will explore my other interest policy making. Hence I worked as a Swaniti Fellow with a Member of Parliament helping him plan how to use his capital for maximum benefit of his constituency. This is a 3 month fellowship. Post fellowship I worked with Swaniti as a Volunteer for 3 months to help in BD proceess. In January I joined TechnoServe( international not profit promoting business solutions to poverty). In my current role I am working with Uttarakhand Organic Commodity Board to help catalyze investments in the agriculture space.

Mu Sigma (July 2008 - Apr 2011) Sr. Sales Executive and Business Analyst IYCN (Nov 2009 - Apr 2011)
Kuliza ( May 2011 - Feb 2012) Solutions Specialist
Swaniti (May 2012 - Sep 2012) Fellow
Swaniti ( October 2012 - Dec 2012) Volunteer Business Development
TechnoServe ( Jan 2013 - present) Sr. Associate working with Uttarakhand State government to create entrepreneurship cell for the state)

Concerns:
"¢ Career path seems to be a little unstructured (Analytics - social media startup- Fellowship - TechnoServe)
"¢ There is a gap of 3 months between my last job and my starting the fellowship ( I was working as a freelancer, I don't want to mention that, its something I did for cash)

Why MBA :

Short term goal - work for a consulting firm preferably in the social sector or public sector arm or internal consulting arm of a Food&Beverage company.
Long term goal - create a social venture in the healthy food space to serve globally.

Schools - Ross, Booth, Cornell & Fuqua

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by Jon@Admissionado » Wed Jul 17, 2013 12:57 am
Hey good sir!
Actually I REALLY like your profile, and your story too. It's a nice and important change from "I'm from Tech and want to make more money, so I want to go into finance", which is the most common profile we are seeing coming out from India. I think you have some impressive stuff, and your work with Parliament should count nicely, esp. if you can get a good recommendation from the MP.

Your career path CAN seem a bit messy at first glance, but I feel that if you tell it like you did here, it makes complete sense, and when you write your essays you should do the same thing, focusing on your dedication to improving India. From your choices I have no doubt that your dedication is sincere and you should be able to convince the Adcoms of the same. The obvious choices for schools are the top Non-profit/ NGO programs, so: HBS, Stanford, Yale, Haas, Ross, Kellogg (You can look at full rankings on US News or Beyond Grey Pinstripes).

I think in a case like yours, apply to more schools rather than less. Why? Besides the tougher Indian profile, you are applying based on "story", much more so that someone who for example would just be continuing in their industry and wants a management position... so at the same time, you have better chances at the tougher schools, but at the same time things are more unsure. Also, applying to more schools will give you better chances at getting scholarships, which if you are going into non-profit, may be helpful for you, dude.
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