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by prat_agl » Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:27 pm
In the early twentieth century, an extraordinary painter could influence nearly all advanced artists, but today, for any one artist to influence practitioners of genres as varied as painting, video, and photography is nearly impossible.
(A) as varied as
(B) as varied as are
(C) as varied as those of
(D) that are as varied as
(E) that are as varied as are

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by Tommy Wallach » Mon Feb 04, 2013 9:12 pm
In the early twentieth century, an extraordinary painter could influence nearly all advanced artists, but today, for any one artist to influence practitioners of genres as varied as painting, video, and photography is nearly impossible.
(A) as varied as
(B) as varied as are
(C) as varied as those of
(D) that are as varied as
(E) that are as varied as are
(B) This question revolves around a meaning issue. In this answer choice, it's painting, video, and photography that are varied. But that's the wrong meaning. The variation is simply in the genres themselves; painting, video, and photography are quite varied genres. How do we know this? The idea is that a painter could once influence all advanced artists, because all art was so similar. But now, video and photography are so different from painting, it's unlikely a painter could influence someone working in those media.

(C) "Those" could only refer to "genres," which makes no sense: "...practitioners of genres as varied as the genres of painting, video, and photography." At best, this is redundant. At worst, it's crazy wrong, because there aren't genres inside the genres!

(D) + (E) These both carry the meaning that the genres being listed have the variety inside of them (just as (A) did).

Let me know if that makes sense, or if you have follow-up questions.

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by gmat4fun » Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:46 am
Agree with Tommy. My extra 2 cents on similar questions -
This one is a question on "Comparison". In such questions, first make sure what is being compared.
In this particular question, please ask yourself what is/are varied? If you know genres are varied, you have won the battle.
The correct form has to be genres as varied as X, Y, and Z. Hence answer should be A.

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by prat_agl » Tue Feb 05, 2013 10:10 pm
Thanks tommy. Can you please elaborate what is wrong with d? I am still confused between a and d

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by Tommy Wallach » Wed Feb 06, 2013 12:09 pm
Hey Prat,

(D) actually carries the same meaning as (E). Or, better put, we don't know if it does. It's like this example I've used before:

I love you more than Justin Bieber.

Does that sentence mean "I love you more than Justin Bieber does"? Or "I love you more than I love Justin Bieber"?

As written, there's no way to know, so the sentence is incorrect. Similarly, we don't know what's meant by (D). It could be "genres that are as varied as painting, video, and photography are" or the correct meaning we get in (A).

Make more sense?

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P.S. More good news, (D) is so much wordier than (A), that you'd still pick (A) just for efficiency!
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by prat_agl » Wed Feb 06, 2013 12:22 pm
Thanks Tommy.