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The majority of scientists believe that to reduce and stabilize atmospheric concentrations of carbon dioxide, emissions must be cut at the source by fossil fuels that are burned more efficiently and, in some cases, by alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells that can replace fossil fuels altogether.
(A) fossil fuels that are burned more efficiently and, in some cases, by alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells that can replace fossil fuels altogether
(B) fossil fuels that are burned more efficiently and, in some cases, those that are replaced altogether with alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells
(C) burning fossil fuels more efficiently and, in some cases, by replacing fossil fuels altogether with alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells
(D) more efficiency in the burning of fossil fuels and, in some cases, by alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells that can replace fossil fuels altogether
(E) the more efficient burning of fossil fuels and, in some cases, by fossil fuels that are replaced altogether with alternatives such as hydrogen fuel cells

This sentence needs a common construction: 'by + verb-ing'. 'By' is used when you describe the method used to accomplish (HOW) something - exactly what is done in this sentence. The sentence is explaining how the states are going to accomplish the stated goal.

If we say:

You should study daily. By doing so, you will improve consistently.

Or

One can't become smarter by facing the same challenges every day.

A and B are wrong because emissions can't be cut by fossil fuels ... rather they can be cut by more efficient burning of fossil fuels.

D is not parallel; 'by more efficiency' is not parallel to 'alternatives (fuels)'.

E is not parallel; 'the more efficient burning' is not parallel to 'fossil fuels'.

C is perfectly parallel ... by burning || by replacing.

C: correct.
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by pinchharmonic » Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:26 am
D is not parallel; 'by more efficiency' is not parallel to 'alternatives (fuels)'.

is this a meaning problem or a parallelism problem?

"efficiency" is a noun and "alternatives" is a noun as well. from that top level point of view they are parallel, but I agree the meaning in the context of the sentence is not.

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by GmatKiss » Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:20 am
IMO: C, Parallel and concise.