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compare and contrast

by daretodream » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:56 pm
Although dozens of New York's small museums are either devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, there are many one-of-a-kind museums from Manhattan to the Bronx that are open for exploration on summer weekends.

(A) Although dozens of New York's small museums are either devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, there are
(B) Although dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups,
(C) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, but there are
(D) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, and there are also -
(E) Devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, dozens of New York's small museums and also

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by kstv » Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:04 pm
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by reply2spg » Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:07 pm
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by thephoenix » Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:59 am
daretodream wrote:Although dozens of New York's small museums are either devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, there are many one-of-a-kind museums from Manhattan to the Bronx that are open for exploration on summer weekends.

(A) Although dozens of New York's small museums are either devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, there are
(B) Although dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups,
(C) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, but there are
(D) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, and there are also -
(E) Devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, dozens of New York's small museums and also
prev i went for C but now i thik its D

(A) Although dozens of New York's small museums are either devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, there are (contrast is not needed; either is misplaced)

(B) Although dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups,
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(C) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, but there are
(contrast is not needed)


(D) Dozens of New York's small museums are devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, and there are also

(E) Devoted to local history or various ethnic groups, dozens of New York's small museums and also

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