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by gmatmachoman » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:07 pm
There were concerns that the nation's new center for the contemporary arts - a complex of 27 buildings totaling more than 720,000 square feet - might be successful and it would eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

A. it would eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

B. it might eventually over about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

C. eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

D. eventually bring over the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

E. it will eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

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by Osirus@VeritasPrep » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:11 pm
I would choose C. Using "it" is ambiguous.

A- Use of it

B- use of it and this is just awkward

C- correct

D- "bring over" changes the meaning

E- use of "it"
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by akahuja143 » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:12 pm
D seems to be concise answer

I am thinking we don't need it here A, B,and E and between C and D i just guessed.. but whenever I guess I am always wrong
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by hrishi19884 » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:13 pm
gmatmachoman wrote:There were concerns that the nation's new center for the contemporary arts - a complex of 27 buildings totaling more than 720,000 square feet - might be successful and it would eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

A. it would eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

B. it might eventually over about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

C. eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

D. eventually bring over the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

E. it will eventually bring about the closing of the Massy Art Complex.

My stake on A

"it" is necessary to denote "complex of 27 buildings"

Rules out C and D
might should be followed by "would' and not "will" when we have past tense in the sentence "there were concerns"

Rules out E

"over about" is wrongly used.
rules out B

left is A which is grammatically correct.
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by hrishi19884 » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:15 pm
akahuja143 wrote:D seems to be concise answer
Reasons?
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by Giorgio » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:15 pm
One more vote for A

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by gmatmachoman » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:16 pm
Hrishi &Gio,

seems ur liking these SC's???

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by hrishi19884 » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:20 pm
gmatmachoman wrote:Hrishi &Gio,

seems ur liking these SC's???
Its all because of you man!....You are the Capton of our ship!
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