redundancy check

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redundancy check

by Kuhu » Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:02 pm
most recovering heroin addicts seek to be free both of drug dependency and of prejudicial treatment as well.

in this sentence I found 'as well' is redundant.
Please help with this sentence!!!!

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by tohellandback » Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:23 pm
and it should be "of both" and not "both of"
The powers of two are bloody impolite!!