//Unlike computer skill or other technicle skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are week//

a,

b,unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak

c,Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree

d,Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak

e,many people have a disinclination to recognize tht weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills

I do not understand " while willing creates incomplete construction" as explain by OG 11. pls help

No

while learning English, I talk to her

this is correct and similar to E

so, why "while willing" in E is wrong, pls help

I do not understand

in E, "while willing " modify "I" and is correct, not wrong

why ETS said it is wrong

I think that "while willing" is correct in E because the sentence will be


"many people have .... while willing to..."

E may be wrong because it use "have a disinclination..."which is wordy and not direct but it can not be wrong because it has "while willing..."

but OG explanation said that "while willing" there is wrong. Pls help me understand this point.

IMO still D will win....because E still suffers the same problem as of original E....i.e.

""while willing" is actually modifying "analytical skills" if we go by the logic of immediately preceding noun.... or atmax "weakness of Analytical skills"....if we go by noun phrase logic...

Thus the above "while willing" is wrongly placed...as opposed to "D" in which it is rightly placed...."

Please tell if I am missing something here.

//Unlike computer skill or other technicle skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are week//

a,

b,unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak

c,Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree

d,Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak

e,many people have a disinclination to recognize tht weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills

I do not understand " while willing creates incomplete construction" as explain by OG 11. pls help

Hi Ashwani,

This looks logical...but it looks like there is something more to it....Please see the following question from OG-10, Q233. Here OA is "C". But the sentence following the "while" does not have subject in the same. Is there some exception to the rule that you mentioned....

Overall the rule that you mentioned looks to be pretty much followed by OG. Thanks for telling about the rule.

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Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.
(A) fatigue among shift workers, and have raised
(B) fatigue among shift workers, and raised
(C) and fatigue among shift workers while raising
(D) lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised
(E) and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising