When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers, it is an encouraging sign for the health of the airline industry.
A - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers
B - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many passengers who are price-sensitive
C - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it acting as a deterrent to many price-sensitive passengers
D - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
E - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
whats wrong in B
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IMO -- A..thephoenix wrote:When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers, it is an encouraging sign for the health of the airline industry.
A - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers
B - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many passengers who are price-sensitive
C - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it acting as a deterrent to many price-sensitive passengers
D - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
E - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
whats wrong in B
I think B is wordy..
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"Price-sensitive passengers" is a less-wordy way of saying "passengers who are price-sensitive." Remember that when you've narrowed your choices down and all the remaining answers are free of discernible grammatical flaws, turn to style issues, including conciseness.