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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 6:41 pm    Post subject: Tricky SC from GMATPrep Reply with quote

Thoughts?

Recently documented examples of neurogenesis, the production of new
brain cells, include the brain growing in mice when placed in a
stimulating environment or neurons increasing in canaries that learn
new songs.

A. the brain growing in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or
neurons increasing in canaries that

B. mice whose brains grow when they are placed in a stimulating
environment or canaries whose neurons increase when they

C. mice's brains that grow when they are placed in a stimulating
environment or canaries' neurons that increase when they

D. the brain growth in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or
the increase in canaries' neurons when they

E. brain growth in mice that are placed in a stimulating environment or
an increase in neurons in canaries that
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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 9:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tough one - thinking E. What is the correct answer?
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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 10:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In my opinion, Ans is B

(A) documented and growing do not go together
(B) they is ambiguous but this is the only parallel answer
mice whose brains grow when they are placed in a stimulating environment or canaries whose neurons increase when they
(C) they seems to point to brains
(D) they seems to point to neurons
(E) not parallel
brain growth in mice that are placed in a stimulating environment or an increase in neurons in canaries that
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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 10:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

b,c ,d are out as they is ambiguous if pointin to brains or mice ..or canary or neurons...
is the OA "A"
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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 10:49 pm    Post subject: I think D Reply with quote

Examples of neurogenesis can't be mice and canaries; it can be brain growth in mice and increase of neurons in canaries. That does away with B and C.
A does not use the right noun form "growth".
Now left with D and E.
E uses " ... brain growth ... an increase ... ". I would prefer not to use the word "an".

Hence I'll choose D. But I still have my doubts.

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PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 11:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OA is D

as rdadbhawala pointed out the e.g. of neurogenesis can not be mice and canaries. Hence, the ans will be between D and E

D is more parallel and hence the ans
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PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 5:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

netigen wrote:
OA is D

as rdadbhawala pointed out the e.g. of neurogenesis can not be mice and canaries. Hence, the ans will be between D and E

D is more parallel and hence the ans


Yes, OA is D- thanks guys. Tough one.
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PostPosted: Thu May 29, 2008 3:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

mim3 wrote:
netigen wrote:
OA is D

as rdadbhawala pointed out the e.g. of neurogenesis can not be mice and canaries. Hence, the ans will be between D and E

D is more parallel and hence the ans


Yes, OA is D- thanks guys. Tough one.


Good stuff but can u elaborate more why D and not E? Thanks

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2008 6:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i guess "d" has "they" which seems ambiguous..so "e" is rgt
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PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

rattanas wrote:
i guess "d" has "they" which seems ambiguous..so "e" is rgt



My thoughts exactly but the correct answer is D!

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

guys,

I took GMATPrep today and the correct answer is E

OA is not D but E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

D - they is ambigous
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