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To map Earth's interior, geologists use a network of seismometers to chart seismic waves that originate in the earth's crust and ricochet around its interior, most rapidly traveling through cold. dense regions and slower through hotter rocks.

A. interior, most rapidly traveling through cold, dense regions and slower
B. interior, which travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions, and more slowly
C. interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions and more slowly
D. interior and most rapidly travel through cold, dense regions, and slower
E. interior and that travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions and slower

OA: C

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Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?
Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to refer to the agent of the NEAREST PRECEDING ACTION.
OA: waves that...ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions.
Here, the action that most closely precedes COMMA + traveling is ricochet.
Thus, traveling serves to refers to waves, the agent of this action.
Conveyed meaning:
As waves RICOCHET, they are at the same time TRAVELING.

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2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.
Parallel forms must serve the SAME FUNCTION.
A that-modifier is an ESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.
A which-modifier is a NONESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that can be removed without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.
Since a that-modifier and a which-modifier serve different functions, they cannot be connected by a conjunction such as and.
Hi GMATGuruNY ,

Thank you so much for your reply. All clear.

Thanks,

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Needgmat wrote:
Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?
Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to refer to the agent of the NEAREST PRECEDING ACTION.
OA: waves that...ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions.
Here, the action that most closely precedes COMMA + traveling is ricochet.
Thus, traveling serves to refers to waves, the agent of this action.
Conveyed meaning:
As waves RICOCHET, they are at the same time TRAVELING.

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2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.
Parallel forms must serve the SAME FUNCTION.
A that-modifier is an ESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.
A which-modifier is a NONESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that can be removed without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.
Since a that-modifier and a which-modifier serve different functions, they cannot be connected by a conjunction such as and.

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Needgmat wrote:
Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?
Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to refer to the agent of the NEAREST PRECEDING ACTION.
OA: waves that...ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions.
Here, the action that most closely precedes COMMA + traveling is ricochet.
Thus, traveling serves to refers to waves, the agent of this action.
Conveyed meaning:
As waves RICOCHET, they are at the same time TRAVELING.

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2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.
Parallel forms must serve the SAME FUNCTION.
A that-modifier is an ESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.
A which-modifier is a NONESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that can be removed without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.
Since a that-modifier and a which-modifier serve different functions, they cannot be connected by a conjunction such as and.
Hi GMATGuruNY ,

Thank you so much for your reply. All clear.

Thanks,

Kavin

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Needgmat wrote:
Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?
Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to refer to the agent of the NEAREST PRECEDING ACTION.
OA: waves that...ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions.
Here, the action that most closely precedes COMMA + traveling is ricochet.
Thus, traveling serves to refers to waves, the agent of this action.
Conveyed meaning:
As waves RICOCHET, they are at the same time TRAVELING.

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2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.
Parallel forms must serve the SAME FUNCTION.
A that-modifier is an ESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.
A which-modifier is a NONESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that can be removed without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.
Since a that-modifier and a which-modifier serve different functions, they cannot be connected by a conjunction such as and.

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GMATGuruNY wrote:
Needgmat wrote:
Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?
Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to refer to the agent of the NEAREST PRECEDING ACTION.
OA: waves that...ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions.
Here, the action that most closely precedes COMMA + traveling is ricochet.
Thus, traveling serves to refers to waves, the agent of this action.
Conveyed meaning:
As waves RICOCHET, they are at the same time TRAVELING.

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2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.
Parallel forms must serve the SAME FUNCTION.
A that-modifier is an ESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.
A which-modifier is a NONESSENTIAL MODIFIER: one that can be removed without altering the basic meaning of the sentence.
Since a that-modifier and a which-modifier serve different functions, they cannot be connected by a conjunction such as and.
Hi Mitch
Then how about Noun + Comma + Modifier + Comma + clause, this modifier between these 2 commas is also nonessential?

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I am a little confused about choice C and choice E. I understand most rapidly and slower are not parallel in E. OG said "The action, ricochet, is further described in a participial phrase in which traveling...is then further described in a comparison of travel speeds in cold and hot regions of Earth's crust." I don't agree with it and I think two that-clauses in E are parallel and they all modify seismic waves. In choice C, the structure is "Clause + Comma + Travelling" and I think travelling ... modifies the subject of previous clause -- seismic waves. Am I correct or someone can correct me?
Thanks in advance!
E: seismic waves that originate in the earth's crust and ricochet around its interior and that travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions
Here, the that-modifier in red serves to refer to seismic waves.
Its role is purely adjectival, describing the KIND of seismic waves under discussion.
What KIND of seismic waves?
Seismic waves THAT TRAVEL MOST RAPIDLY THROUGH COLD, DENSE REGIONS.

OA: seismic waves that originate in the earth's crust and ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions
Here, the COMMA + VERBing modifier in red serves to refer both to the preceding ACTION (ricochet) and to the agent of this action (seismic waves).
Unlike a that-modifier -- whose function is purely adjectival -- a COMMA + VERBing modifier plays both an adjectival and an ADVERBIAL role.
As an adjective, it describes the agent of the preceding action.
As an adverb, it serves to express an action happening AT THE SAME TIME AS or AS A DIRECT RESULT OF the preceding action.
In the OA, one function of COMMA + traveling is to serve as an ADJECTIVE describing the KIND of seismic waves under discussion.
What KIND of seismic waves?
Seismic waves TRAVELING MOST RAPIDLY THROUGH COLD, DENSE REGIONS.
However, COMMA + traveling is also an ADVERB modifying the preceding action -- ricochet -- since the act of TRAVELING happens as a direct result of this action.
For this reason, COMMA + traveling can be said to describe HOW seismic waves RICOCHET.
Thank you so much! Your explanation is crystal clear!

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Crystal W wrote:
I am a little confused about choice C and choice E. I understand most rapidly and slower are not parallel in E. OG said "The action, ricochet, is further described in a participial phrase in which traveling...is then further described in a comparison of travel speeds in cold and hot regions of Earth's crust." I don't agree with it and I think two that-clauses in E are parallel and they all modify seismic waves. In choice C, the structure is "Clause + Comma + Travelling" and I think travelling ... modifies the subject of previous clause -- seismic waves. Am I correct or someone can correct me?
Thanks in advance!
E: seismic waves that originate in the earth's crust and ricochet around its interior and that travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions
Here, the that-modifier in red serves to refer to seismic waves.
Its role is purely adjectival, describing the KIND of seismic waves under discussion.
What KIND of seismic waves?
Seismic waves THAT TRAVEL MOST RAPIDLY THROUGH COLD, DENSE REGIONS.

OA: seismic waves that originate in the earth's crust and ricochet around its interior, traveling most rapidly through cold, dense regions
Here, the COMMA + VERBing modifier in red serves to refer both to the preceding ACTION (ricochet) and to the agent of this action (seismic waves).
Unlike a that-modifier -- whose function is purely adjectival -- a COMMA + VERBing modifier plays both an adjectival and an ADVERBIAL role.
As an adjective, it describes the agent of the preceding action.
As an adverb, it serves to express an action happening AT THE SAME TIME AS or AS A DIRECT RESULT OF the preceding action.
In the OA, one function of COMMA + traveling is to serve as an ADJECTIVE describing the KIND of seismic waves under discussion.
What KIND of seismic waves?
Seismic waves TRAVELING MOST RAPIDLY THROUGH COLD, DENSE REGIONS.
However, COMMA + traveling is also an ADVERB modifying the preceding action -- ricochet -- since the act of TRAVELING happens as a direct result of this action.
For this reason, COMMA + traveling can be said to describe HOW seismic waves RICOCHET.

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I am a little confused about choice C and choice E. I understand most rapidly and slower are not parallel in E. OG said "The action, ricochet, is further described in a participial phrase in which traveling...is then further described in a comparison of travel speeds in cold and hot regions of Earth's crust." I don't agree with it and I think two that-clauses in E are parallel and they all modify seismic waves. In choice C, the structure is "Clause + Comma + Travelling" and I think travelling ... modifies the subject of previous clause -- seismic waves. Am I correct or someone can correct me?
Thanks in advance!

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Hi GMATGuruNY ,

I have a two questions:

1) Can you please explain that in OA HOW and WHAT COMMA+VERBing(TRAVELLING) refers to?

2) Can you please explain more about that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure.

Please explain sir.

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B implies the following:
waves that originate in originate in the earth's crust
waves, which travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions

The pronouns in red both seem to refer to waves.
Two different pronouns -- in this case, that and which -- cannot have the same referent.
have a quick question --

in GMAT, that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure. am i correct ?
This line of reasoning is valid.

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B implies the following:
waves that originate in originate in the earth's crust
waves, which travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions

The pronouns in red both seem to refer to waves.
Two different pronouns -- in this case, that and which -- cannot have the same referent.
have a quick question --

in GMAT, that and which clause can't be connected by conjunction and and hence can't be VALID parallel structure. am i correct ?

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Hi GMATGuruNY,

Please can you help elaborate on the rule - "Two different pronouns cannot have the same referent.". Are there other examples that you can also share please?
B implies the following:
waves that originate in originate in the earth's crust
waves, which travel most rapidly through cold, dense regions

The pronouns in red both seem to refer to waves.
Two different pronouns -- in this case, that and which -- cannot have the same referent.

Other examples:
http://www.beatthegmat.com/gprep-sc-17-t277559.html
http://www.beatthegmat.com/the-scandinavian-assault-on-western-europe-culminated-in-the-t286698.html

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Please can you help elaborate on the rule - "Two different pronouns cannot have the same referent.". Are there other examples that you can also share please?

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