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by BTGmoderatorRO » Thu Jan 04, 2018 3:48 am
If the proposed expenditures for gathering information abroad are reduced even further, international news report have been and will continue to dimish in number and quality.
(a). have been and will continue to dimish
(b). have and will continue to diminish
(c). will continue to diminish, as they already did
(d) will continue to diminish, as they have already
(e). will continue to diminish

OA is E
OA says E but whats wrong with option B. An Expert view will be appreciated.

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by alanforde800Maximus » Thu Jun 07, 2018 4:42 am
(B) have and will continue to diminish -> Will continue to diminish provides a sense that they are diminishing already. Have been is not required.
have diminished -> "Diminished" can be ellipsed when "diminished" is already used somewhere else in the sentence

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by ceilidh.erickson » Fri Jun 08, 2018 11:08 am
BTGmoderatorRO wrote:If the proposed expenditures for gathering information abroad are reduced even further, international news report have been and will continue to dimish in number and quality.
(a). have been and will continue to dimish
(b). have and will continue to diminish
(c). will continue to diminish, as they already did
(d) will continue to diminish, as they have already
(e). will continue to diminish

OA is E
OA says E but whats wrong with option B. An Expert view will be appreciated.
The structure "if ____, then ____" implies CAUSE + EFFECT. Logically, the cause must happen before the effect. Therefore, the verb tenses must follow suit.

"If expenditures... are reduced..." --> present tense. It's hypothetical, so this reduction hasn't happened yet, but it could presumably happen right now. If this reduction causes the diminishing in news report quality, that diminishing must happen after the reduction.
"If expenditures... are reduced, news reports have diminished..." --> this is illogical for cause + effect.
"If expenditures... are reduced, news reports will diminish.." --> this makes logical sense.
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by ceilidh.erickson » Fri Jun 08, 2018 11:13 am
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