SC

This topic has expert replies
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 195
Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 4:33 am
Thanked: 10 times

SC

by sankruth » Fri Dec 21, 2007 1:04 pm
How do you approach this sentence...

Although many Whites, noting the presence of some Blacks in the middle class, think that the time for enforcing civil rights measures is past, Blacks generally are aware that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of a radical discrepancy as ever.

(A) that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of
(B) that average-income and unemployment figures show as wide
(C) that the average-income and unemployment figures are showing as wide of
(D) of average-income and unemployment figures that show as wide of
(E) of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide

Newbie | Next Rank: 10 Posts
Posts: 3
Joined: Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:59 pm

by diya123 » Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:48 pm
hi i go with B

Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 195
Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 4:33 am
Thanked: 10 times

by sankruth » Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:51 am
diya123 wrote:hi i go with B
Thanks diya, but what I was looking for was an explanation for your choice (which is correct!)

User avatar
Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
Posts: 77
Joined: Mon Jul 09, 2007 6:54 pm
Location: US of A

by Auzbee » Sat Dec 22, 2007 4:46 pm
I'd go with B.

Use of correct idiom in the sentence - "as wide of" is wrong. Should be "as wide as". Leaves with option B and E.

Next check for parallel structure in option B - "..figures show as wide.." vs option E - "..showing as wide..". Option B sounds is structurally correct with "..Blacks generally are aware ..."

Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts
Posts: 28
Joined: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:06 am
Thanked: 4 times

by seekmba » Sun Dec 23, 2007 9:16 pm
Agree with Auzbee as wide as is required. B

Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
Posts: 38
Joined: Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:58 pm
Thanked: 3 times

by CrazyGmatter » Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:13 pm
"as wide as" is the correct idiom..

B it is..

Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 195
Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 4:33 am
Thanked: 10 times

by sankruth » Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:16 pm
Thanks guys!