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Topic: Profile Evauation
PostFri Feb 06, 2009 3:06 am

Hi,
I saw your valuable suggestions here, so though of asking about my profile.

Here are some of the main points of my profile..

GMAT score - 700

Education
B.Sc. (Geology, Physics, Maths) - INDIA - 72% - topper of class
M.C.A. (Masters in computer applications) - INDIA- 78% - topper University


Total work Experience - 7 years. (IT Engineer,Entrepreneur ( Immigration, Insurance, Sales), Research scholar)

From last 3 year - Entrepreneur (UK) - Started and running my company in the UK with profit since first year of business with overseas expansion. Main area of work was Immigration Services, S/w Product development and sales.

Before that 3 years (UK and India) I was working with Oracle corp and SAP Labs. and provided ERP consultancy.

Before that I was working as an entrepreneur and doing business of Insurance in India, with ICICI prudential.

I was also a part of AI research project for the development of a smart AI system.


Social contribution : Part of fundation member of 2 NGO and charity organization.

Overall my CV is full of variety.

I am planning to target Oxford, Cambridge, Cranfield, Machester.

Please advise about my chances for these institutes.

As I am in UK, I want to join some college in UK only. Also advice if you feel that as an entrepreneur I will get some priority, if yes then where and how.

Thanks in advance.
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PostFri Feb 06, 2009 1:20 pm

Hello,

From the information you provided I believe you would be a viable candidate for the programs you mention. However, you left out one important element: your goals. To be truly competitive you must articulate goals that are appropriate ambitious but achievable and that make sense in light of your experience. You also should be prepared to discuss how the specific programs will help you fill your knowledge gaps for those goals.

I do see one challenge even though you appear to be a viable candidate. You state correctly that your resume has a lot of variety - but that variety not good or bad on its face. It can be positive if you weave it into a coherent story. It can be bad otherwise by making you appear unfocused and indecisive, drifting here and there as the current inclination or situation arises. The adcoms want to see focus and drive - and that implies toward something…. Your essays will be the place to turn this variety into a coherent story - ideally one that connects to your defined career goals.

Cindy Tokumitsu
Senior Editor, Accepted.com
www.Accepted.com
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