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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:36 am    Post subject: GMAT Prep Question Reply with quote

Is this some kind of a software error? 'C' clearly violates the idiom "not only...but also"..!!

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 12:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting question.

I think the only problem in E is the extra "coma" which creates sentence fragment.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

'E' seems correct in every aspect. It also uses comma and the coordinating conjunction "but" appropriately to avoid a fragment.

I dont know what have I missed. Is there still any other reason that 'E' is wrong...
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 10:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Strange about C. I have seen writers use "not only X but Y" in the real world but it's rare - and I have never seen the test do that.

E technically breaks the idiom too, though. It says

"were not only able to... but they were also able to..."

Correct usage should be "were not only X but also Y"

If I had had to choose on this one, I'd probably have gone with E also. You should email them and ask! (And let us know if they reply!)

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