By 1914, ten of the western states had granted women

simplyjat

By 1914, ten of the western states had granted women the right to vote, but only one in the East.

(A) only one in the East
(B) only one eastern state
(C) in the East there was only one state
(D) in the East only one state did
(E) only one in the East had

OA E
Shouldn't we consider parallelism here, western/eastern ?

VP_Jim · Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:43 pm Post subject:

Hi simplyjat,

Yes, definitely this sentence needs to be parallel. I think you're right that the best way of saying this would be "western states" and "eastern states". However, there are more pressing parallel construction issues that render choice B incorrect.

We are trying to say that 10 western states had granted the right to vote, but only one eastern state (or state in the east) had granted the right to vote. So, we need to repeat the word "had" after "east" to keep the sentence parallel.

Thus, only E can be correct.

Remember: the GMAT writers will try to throw you off with things that "sound bad" or "look bad" - focus instead on the grammatical rules.

simplyjat · Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 9:49 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the explanation Jim.

I have one more question. There is something called ellipse construction. Where you omit some words in the repetition. Can't we omit had here?

tmmyc · Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 10:04 pm Post subject:

I think I know what you're saying simplyjat, but I don't think that pertains to this case.

We are trying to compare what the ten western states had done versus what the one eastern state had done.

The original answer compares what the ten western states had done to the one eastern state itself which doesn't work.