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marcussuzuki
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 Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:50 am Post subject: Please rate my MGMAT AWA: Analyze Argument |
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Thank you in advance for any input.
Last edited by marcussuzuki on Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:13 am; edited 1 time in total |
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parore26
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:59 am Post subject: |
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| I have a general comment, the length of both your essays are relatively short that in itself isn't a bad thing. You should also try and present at least two arguments instead of just one argument. Other than these your writing style is good and with a little better time management you should do well on this part. Best of Luck! |
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marcussuzuki
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| Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: |
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| Thanks for the rating and feedback. Just took the GMAT today and I don't think I'll be taking it again. Your feedback came just in time. I was much more thorough in the real test and I hope it pays off. I guess I'll find out in a few weeks. |
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