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please rate my essay. Thanks a lot!

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please rate my essay. Thanks a lot!

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    Davis Technologies, a computer-chip maker, could solve its problem of declining sales by dropping its prices. This would make Davis better able to compete in the highly competitive computer chip market. The sales of chips would increase and this would substantially boost Davis' market share.

    Describe how well reasoned you find this argument. In the discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the argument's conclusion. You may also address possible changes in the argument that would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.

    Althought, the fact of reducing the price of computer-chip that will leads to an
    increase of sales of the company is effective since the main goal of any company is
    to make profit to satisfy the shareholders and the owners. I agree with the
    statement, because Davis Technologies has the duty to have a satisfying return in
    order to meet the benchmarks and the shareholders expectations.

    First, by decreasing the price of computer-chip, Davis Technologies will
    automatically creates an incentive deal that will attract more customers. The market
    is very competitive and the customers will judge the different products based on
    their price and accessibility. For example, when the price will be lowered and the
    sales will increase, it will have a good impact on the share price of the company and
    they will be able to take over the computer-chip market.

    Second, Davis technologies is going to attract investor in the sense that they are
    doing great on the market due to their impressive revenue. At this point, the money
    invested in the company is enough to get back to the regular price since the
    relationship with the customers will be at his peak. For example, Apple has
    launched the iPhone 6S in 2015, customers found it expensive, so they created a
    brand new iPhone, iPhone SE, that has the same commodities as the iPhone 6S
    but in the same shape as the iPhone 5S with a lower price and easy access.

    In other hand, some would say lowering the price of computer-chip is not a good
    idea to increase the sales because the company will decrease in value. Since The
    price of the final product will be lower than the price of the input, this will inevitably
    lead the company to lose in value and in the same time unmeet their expaectations.

    In conclusion, lower the price of computer-chip would be useful to boost the sales of
    the company because it will attract more customers in first place and soon later
    more investors. Although some will say the company is going to decrease in value
    and this will obviously affect the share price of Davis Technologies on the market.

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