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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:59 pm    Post subject: MGMAT QUESTION Reply with quote

Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.

A) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
B) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
C) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
D) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
E) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting upon returning to Paris because of the hectic pace.

OA is D

Can someone explain why E is wrong?
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:03 pm    Post subject: Re: MGMAT QUESTION Reply with quote

Stockmoose16 wrote:
Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.

A) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
B) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
C) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
D) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
E) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting upon returning to Paris because of the hectic pace.

OA is D

Can someone explain why E is wrong?


I dont understand why C is wrong.
Don't we say I lived in U.S for 9 Years????
How can we say I Lived for 9 years in the U.S??

in addition D sounds like Having lived for several years sounds like the guy is dead?


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:05 pm    Post subject: Re: MGMAT QUESTION Reply with quote

Gmatss wrote:
Stockmoose16 wrote:
Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.

A) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
B) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, it was difficult for Paul Gauguin to readjust to the hectic pace of Paris upon returning.
C) Having lived in Tahiti for several years, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
D) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting to the hectic pace of Paris upon his return.
E) Having lived for several years in Tahiti, where life was slow and relaxed, Paul Gauguin had difficulty readjusting upon returning to Paris because of the hectic pace.

OA is D

Can someone explain why E is wrong?


I dont understand why C is wrong.
Don't we say I lived in U.S for 9 Years????
How can we say I Lived for 9 years in the U.S??


C is wrong because "where life was slow and relaxed" is modifying "years" instead of "Tahiti." Still would like to know what's wrong with E, though.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

in D - readjusting is modifier for hectic pace, so both the words should be close.
in E. hectic pace is placed at theend, so its not very clear what "readjusting" is modifying - Hope I got it correct
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

in E it is not clear what hectic pace is modifying, Paul Gauguin or Paris. That's why E is incorrect

and for B, I think Paul Gauguin needs to come closer to ''Having lived for several years in Tahiti'' (who lived? Paul Gauguin..............)
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

E seems to say that "hectic pace was the reason for Paul's return to Paris".
Hence E wrong.
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