Japan and depression

[This topic has 8 member replies]
Free $100 Amazon.com Gift Card - Buy a GMAT course using a Beat The GMAT discount code between Mar 8-22 and get a $100 Amazon.com Gift Card. Learn more!
Post New Topic   Post Reply

caspermonday
Rising GMAT Star

Default Avatar

Joined: 14 Aug 2009
Posts: 59

Thanks given: 2
Thanked 0 times in 0 posts

Topic: Japan and depression
PostWed Sep 09, 2009 11:35 am

Elapsed Time:
00:00
Lap   Why a timer is critical to improving your score

49. According to some economists, Japan is in danger of plunging into a depression that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain a society that regards lifetime employment as a virtual right of citizenship.

(A) that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain
(B) that, because of double-digit unemployment, could be a severe strain for
(C) with double-digit unemployment, and it could severely strain
(D) with double-digit unemployment and could be a severe strain
(E) with double-digit unemployment and could severely strain

OA A
What iis wrong with B??
Thanks!


Last edited by caspermonday on Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:57 am; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
sat_gen1982
Just gettin' started!

Default Avatar

Joined: 14 Aug 2009
Posts: 4

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 0 times in 0 posts

Test Date: 24th Sept 2009

PostWed Sep 09, 2009 11:52 am

IMHO

(A) that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain - means that Japan is in danger of going into a recession which along with double digit unemployment can cause ... ( both of which are responsible for)
(B) that, because of double-digit unemployment, could be a severe strain for - means that Japan is in danger of going into a recesion because of double digit ... ( only recession is responsible for ..)

Also the correct idiom with strain that I know of is strain on, not sure why the use of adverb is better than that of the adjective.. seniors pls help
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
capnx
Really wants to Beat The GMAT!

Default Avatar

Joined: 15 Aug 2009
Posts: 261

Thanks given: 7
Thanked 14 times in 14 posts

Target GMAT Score: 750
GMAT Score: 700

PostWed Sep 09, 2009 12:17 pm

logically double digit unemployment is the result of recession, not the cause; so using "because" is wrong
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
aspiringgmat
Just gettin' started!

Default Avatar

Joined: 19 Nov 2009
Posts: 7

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 0 times in 0 posts

PostSat Nov 21, 2009 6:36 am

In option (A) ... "that ..." "that" is refering to what ? If it is "depression" then can not we omit it. With this reasoning i chose (C) .. Please explain !!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
OGMATTERS
Rising GMAT Star



Joined: 21 Jun 2009
Posts: 43

Thanks given: 29
Thanked 1 times in 1 posts

Target GMAT Score: 0

PostSat Nov 21, 2009 10:26 am

aspiringgmat wrote:
In option (A) ... "that ..." "that" is refering to what ? If it is "depression" then can not we omit it. With this reasoning i chose (C) .. Please explain !!
(C) with double-digit unemployment, and it could severely strain

I eliminated C because "It" is ambiguous.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
kartik1979
Really wants to Beat The GMAT!

Default Avatar

Joined: 27 Nov 2008
Posts: 115

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 1 times in 1 posts

PostSat Nov 21, 2009 9:58 pm

in gneral there is a way of atrtacking these sentences

According to some economists, Japan is in danger of plunging into a depression- this a part you cant chnage


a society that regards lifetime employment as a virtual right of citizenship.- end part that cannot be changed

you are searching for a connector whichb atatches proper meaning



first look at end of all ans choices

you can immediately remove d - as u requre To

choices a, b,c, e left

next , you see rest of choices
one of them iT ( c) while rest of them do not- it doesnt have clear antecedent hence ignore it for time being

hhmmm

what does the senetnce say- you need to know meaning fo senetnce

do you require "and" - no -snetnce is continuation

left with a and B

depression is followed by that - is coreect

B - depression is not because of double digit unemployment but it is accompanying it

hence clear winner choice A
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
kartik1979
Really wants to Beat The GMAT!

Default Avatar

Joined: 27 Nov 2008
Posts: 115

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 1 times in 1 posts

PostSat Nov 21, 2009 10:01 pm

aND IS USED to show two things of equal signifiance or paarelle

senetce here is stating

despression could strain the society( removing the with double digit unemployment)


hence you dont requiree and
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
kartik1979
Really wants to Beat The GMAT!

Default Avatar

Joined: 27 Nov 2008
Posts: 115

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 1 times in 1 posts

PostSat Nov 21, 2009 10:05 pm

that - normally refers to word before it

unemployemnt that
depression that -

but there are cases where that can refer to a word not immeditely preceing it

but that rule doesnt apply here
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
duongthang
GMAT Destroyer!

Default Avatar

Joined: 20 May 2008
Posts: 739

Thanks given: 2
Thanked 6 times in 6 posts

PostMon Nov 23, 2009 8:08 am

lets check grammar first

no grammar error

lets check meaning

"depression strain" is logic. "japan strain" is not logic

A and B are left.

B uses noun, "a strain on" which is more wordy than verb "strain". for this, read manhantan SC.

remember use verb, do not use noun because noun is more wordy and less direct. that is all
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   

Post New Topic   Post Reply All times are GMT - 7 Hours
Page 1 of 1
 
Most Active Members in Last 30 Days
1. harsh.champ 625 posts
2. shashank.ism 465 posts
3. ajith 370 posts
4. money9111 353 posts
5. thephoenix 349 posts
Most Active Experts in Last 30 Days
1. lunarpower
Manhattan GMAT Teacher
85 posts
2. Stuart Kovinsky
Kaplan GMAT Teacher
70 posts
3. Lisa Anderson
Stacy Blackman Consulting
50 posts
4. Testluv
Kaplan GMAT Teacher
50 posts
5. Stacey Koprince
Manhattan GMAT Teacher
35 posts