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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 12:13 pm    Post subject: Doubt on parallelism ,please clarify Reply with quote
Any real estate professional will tell you that the value of a parcel of a land is most directly affected by How extensively it has been developedand how close it is to a major business,

Both the bolded part of the sentecnes are parallel right ! but "how" is repeated in both the sentences isnt it redundant ? cant we remove 'how" after "and" ... please elucidate


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
read it with out the how. It becomes meaningless.
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