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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 3:55 am    Post subject: Dental caries and gingivitis can be exacerbated Reply with quote

Dental caries and gingivitis can be exacerbated not only by the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them.

(A) not only by the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them
(B) by not only the foods patients eat but also by when the patients eat them
(C) not only by the foods patients eat but also by time when the foods are eaten
(D) by not only the foods that are eaten by patients but also by the times the foods are eaten
(E) not only by what patients eat but also by when they eat it

OA E

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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 3:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

E seems to be the correct answer since:
a) it correctly uses Not only X but also Y
b) the 2 parts after not only & after but also are parallel to each other.
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 2:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i don't know whether this is correct

'them' in A may refer to food

if this is true, E clearly eliminates it
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I am a bit confused what it refers to in option E. I know it refers to what is being eaten but there is no direct reference available.

I agree that rest of the options are incorrect.

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

tar.goyal wrote:
I am a bit confused what it refers to in option E. I know it refers to what is being eaten but there is no direct reference available.

I agree that rest of the options are incorrect.


'IT' can be used when there is no clear referrant to it
it is suprising that .......
the fact that .... is suprising

the first sentence clearly avoids pointing to the fact by using 'it'.
it just assumes that you can infer what is being talked about

this is just my opinion. don't know for 100% that it is correct
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