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Appreciate an Evaluation

by Heseraj » Sat Oct 01, 2016 9:02 pm
Hello, Mosa Rahimi, Originally from Afghanistan.

1. Work experience: I've started as a sergeant in January 2004, rose the rank very quickly and became the Aide the Camp to the Afghan Border Police Director General. In 2008, I left my job to fully pursue higher education and was a lieutenant by then. Joining counter narcotics programs sponsored by the U.S. Government, I worked in different capacities: language assistant, program assistant, senior program assistant and finally adviser to the deputy minister of counter narcotics. My last two promotions, senior program assistant and adviser came after my graduation from college in May 2013. During not only my college but also secondary and high school, I had had a full time job while with hardworking continued my education. However, I've been living in the U.S.A since October 2014 and have had difficulties entering to a relevant career path. Jobs worked in the State, Bank teller, Cashier and currently I work as an over the pone interpreter for Cyracom Internationals.

2. GMAT score 620, 66th percentile, Quant 44, 54th percentile, Verbal, 32, 67th percentile. My score, even though not as high and competitive as needed for top business schools, is the highest, with a gap of 70 points from the second highest, GMAT score that I know any afghan applicants who studied and grew in Afghanistan has gotten.

3. The American University of Afghanistan. GPA 3.31. BBA with concentration in Finance, May 2013

4. Leadership roles: Member of the student government association with highest entry vote, initiator and organizer of a number of gatherings, meetings and fund raisers for students who had difficulties funding their education. In the context my community, my contribution can be defined as the first call for both materialistic and advisory helps. i.e. a place to stay, fund to borrow, take people with health issues who come from my countryside to hospitals or advice in terms of what course of action shall I or my school in children take. (note: I am a strong advocate of female education and was one of the most trusted males who was reached by different females for advice, financial support, either loaning my own money to, or finding another trusted male to borrow for them, and even needs such as transportation from university to home). In the summer of 2014, I turned down the suggestion made by some of my community elders to take part in provincial and district (county) people assembly election on the ground of not being ready for that role.

5. My short terms goals are entering into finance and consulting for a couple of years and get experience in this market. M long term goals are open my own consulting and finance company in Afghanistan with a focus on education support, financial advisory and business operation sustainability.

6. Any top schools specially Harvard, Columbia and Cornell (maybe Fuqua) in particular for my wish list and Daniel Business School, University of Buffalo and Baruch College.

I really appreciate if you provide me your assessment on my profile.

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by MargaretStrother » Fri Oct 21, 2016 10:48 am
What an interesting background, Mosa! Top business schools will appreciate the diversity and intensity of your professional and personal experience.
For HBS and Columbia, your age (based on your chronology, I'm assuming you're around 30...?) and middle-range GMAT might present more of a challenge. You definitely represent a diversity point, but you will need to reassure the adcoms that you can handle the rigorous academics of these top business schools.
So where to go from here? I think you should absolutely apply! What do you have to lose? Just know what you're dealing with heading into the applications, and as you have considered, add a couple of medium-top schools such as Cornell and Fuqua to balance out your package. But if you're up to it, retake the GMAT -- even a 680 would give you much more leverage in admissions.

Good luck!
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