Analysis of an Argument (Please provide feedback)

[This topic has 3 member replies]
Free $100 Amazon.com Gift Card - Buy a GMAT course using a Beat The GMAT discount code between Mar 8-22 and get a $100 Amazon.com Gift Card. Learn more!
Post New Topic   Post Reply

doggdetroit
Just gettin' started!

Default Avatar

Joined: 05 Jul 2009
Posts: 10

Thanks given: 0
Thanked 0 times in 0 posts

Topic: Analysis of an Argument (Please provide feedback)
PostSat Feb 06, 2010 8:36 pm

Elapsed Time:
00:00
Lap   Why a timer is critical to improving your score

The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods:

"Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its 25th birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits."

The above excerpt that appears as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods, states that the company will soon be celebrating its 25th birthday. More importantly, because of its 25 years in the industry, Olympic Foods can expect to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.

However, while the above may be true, the argument is based solely on what has transpired within the color film processing industry. The processing costs of film and the time needed to process film, have decreased in the last 15 or so years. Therefore, the annual report believes that Olympic Foods can likewise expect similar findings in the food processing industry. This is the argument’s biggest flaw. Just because a phenomenon has occurred in one industry does not mean that it has occurred in another.

First of all, the food industry is different from the film industry. With more and more people switching to film that is digital, traditional film has been disappearing. Naturally, if there is little demand for actual film, the costs to process it will go down. The frozen food processing industry however has not experienced such an undertaking. For all intents and purposes, frozen food is still frozen food. There is not a technologically superior version that is rendering the older version obsolete. Therefore if anything, costs to process it should remain about constant.

Secondly, while processing costs may have gone down, and it is absolutely reasonable to believe that Olympic Foods has increased its efficiency in the last 25 years, what about other operational costs such as salaries and benefits? Just because one area of costs has dropped doesn’t mean that profits will rise because it is very likely that another area of costs within a company has risen.

Lastly, while the company is experienced, the food processing industry may have changed in the last 25 years. For example, Olympic Foods may have been one of a few companies operating 25 years ago, whereas today, it is one of hundreds. If there are more companies, there is going to be more competition, and there will be fewer profits available.

Upon first glance, the argument appears to be fairly sound. Olympic Foods has been in the frozen food processing industry for a good amount of time and surely it must have picked up some tricks along the way that would make it capable of operating in a more efficient manner compared to how it operated 25 years ago. Still, Olympic Foods would be wise to not base its hopes on what has occurred within an entirely different industry.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
hrishi19884
GMAT Destroyer!



Joined: 29 Nov 2009
Posts: 406

Thanks given: 12
Thanked 16 times in 16 posts
Location: India

PostMon Feb 08, 2010 2:29 am

doggdetroit wrote:
The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods:

"Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its 25th birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits."

The above excerpt that appears as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods, states that the company will soon be celebrating its 25th birthday. More importantly, because of its 25 years in the industry, Olympic Foods can expect to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.

However, while the above may be true, the argument is based solely on what has transpired within the color film processing industry. The processing costs of film and the time needed to process film, have decreased in the last 15 or so years. Therefore, the annual report believes that Olympic Foods can likewise expect similar findings in the food processing industry. This is the argument’s biggest flaw. Just because a phenomenon has occurred in one industry does not mean that it has occurred in another.

First of all, the food industry is different from the film industry. With more and more people switching to film that is digital, traditional film has been disappearing. Naturally, if there is little demand for actual film, the costs to process it will go down. The frozen food processing industry however has not experienced such an undertaking. For all intents and purposes, frozen food is still frozen food. There is not a technologically superior version that is rendering the older version obsolete. Therefore if anything, costs to process it should remain about constant.

Secondly, while processing costs may have gone down, and it is absolutely reasonable to believe that Olympic Foods has increased its efficiency in the last 25 years, what about other operational costs such as salaries and benefits? Just because one area of costs has dropped doesn’t mean that profits will rise because it is very likely that another area of costs within a company has risen.

Lastly, while the company is experienced, the food processing industry may have changed in the last 25 years. For example, Olympic Foods may have been one of a few companies operating 25 years ago, whereas today, it is one of hundreds. If there are more companies, there is going to be more competition, and there will be fewer profits available.

Upon first glance, the argument appears to be fairly sound. Olympic Foods has been in the frozen food processing industry for a good amount of time and surely it must have picked up some tricks along the way that would make it capable of operating in a more efficient manner compared to how it operated 25 years ago. Still, Olympic Foods would be wise to not base its hopes on what has occurred within an entirely different industry.
I can see that the question is from official guide. There is also a model explanation given for this in ARCO's essay guide.

I must say that you have written a wonderful analysis. Especially, I liked the way you have mentioned reasons by asking questions to the readers, which is hardly done by anyone. I have not checked your grammatical errors but for the reasoning I will give you 5 out of 6. Keep going!

_________________
Hrishi

"As you sow, so shall you reap"
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Reply from Top Beat The GMAT Member
osirus0830
GMAT Titan

Default Avatar Joined: 28 May 2009
Posts: 1197

Thanks given: 45
Thanked 68 times in 67 posts

PostMon Feb 08, 2010 1:41 pm

That's a great essay. I would give it a 6. Best essay I've read on this forum. The computer will definitely give you a 6, can't be sure what the professors will give it.
_________________
http://www.beatthegmat.com/the-retake-osirus-blog-t51414.html
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
rahul.s
GMAT Destroyer!



Joined: 24 Dec 2009
Posts: 324

Thanks given: 51
Thanked 14 times in 12 posts

PostSun Feb 14, 2010 11:10 am

that's a good essay. you've come up with a lot of good points.

however, i'd like to suggest a minor point:

"therefore, the annual report believes that Olympic Foods can likewise expect similar findings in the food processing industry."

this point should have been framed in a different way because it suggests that the annual report believes, which it cannot. "the company's management believes" or "the company's management is of the opinion that" would have been better. but, in the end, it's a strong essay Smile
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   

Post New Topic   Post Reply All times are GMT - 7 Hours
Page 1 of 1
 
Most Active Members in Last 30 Days
1. harsh.champ 621 posts
2. shashank.ism 430 posts
3. ajith 342 posts
4. thephoenix 337 posts
5. money9111 332 posts
Most Active Experts in Last 30 Days
1. lunarpower
Manhattan GMAT Teacher
85 posts
2. Stuart Kovinsky
Kaplan GMAT Teacher
71 posts
3. Lisa Anderson
Stacy Blackman Consulting
50 posts
4. Testluv
Kaplan GMAT Teacher
50 posts
5. Bryant@VeritasPrep
Veritas Prep
30 posts