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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:29 pm    Post subject: According to some analysts Reply with quote

According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment.

(A) its merits, the proposal to tax
(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing
(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing
(D) the proposal’s merits, to tax
(E) the proposal’s merits are, taxing


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IMO A


A--makes the restrictive clause right
Other have modifier problems

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i would go with E



have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment

pronoun "have" doesnt go with antecedent "proposal" in A

whats the OA??
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A B C are incorrect because its is a possessive pronoun and hence subject should be proposal's not proposal.

between D and E

D - to tax is wrong, a noun is required

E is correct because "taxing all........, if enacted, have disastrous" is a gerund phrase
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OA is A


But I'm really unable to figure out why D is wrong...
Can some one help me with D?

Is it because in A "its merits" refer clearly to "Proposal of tax merits "


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 12:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What is the source of this q?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 12:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

schumi_gmat wrote:
What is the source of this q?


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

srisl11 wrote:
OA is A


But I'm really unable to figure out why D is wrong...
Can some one help me with D?

Is it because in A "its merits" refer clearly to "Proposal of tax merits "


only a proposal can be enacted. taxing cant be enacted. so the proposal will have to be the subject.
only A and B have this. B is wordier, shorter is better. hence A
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

scoobydooby wrote:
srisl11 wrote:
OA is A


But I'm really unable to figure out why D is wrong...
Can some one help me with D?

Is it because in A "its merits" refer clearly to "Proposal of tax merits "


only a proposal can be enacted. taxing cant be enacted. so the proposal will have to be the subject.
only A and B have this. B is wordier, shorter is better. hence A


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